It’s open link night over at the dVerse Poets Pub. I decided to create another nonet using a line from Postscript by Seamus Heany: One side is wild with foam and glitter .
One side is wild with foam and glitter —
kaleidoscope of dancing snow.
Conversely, its other half,
a cacophony of
apathy in gray.
Like you and me:
forever
joined at
odds.
Wow, this is incredible, Susan. I love the complexity of this piece, and you entwined the line from the poem well into your own. It fits like a glove, as they say. Beautifully penned. ❤
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Thanks so much, Lucy! I truly appreciate the stellar review. 🙂
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Excellent Susan – very well conjured… I think Seamus himself would have raised a smile and tipped his cap to this piece… Bravo!
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Wow! Thanks so much, Scott. That’s quite a compliment. 🙂 My head is swelling…
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“a cacophony of apathy in gray,”… this is such an excellent description! 💝
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Thanks, Sanaa. It took a minute of playing around before I got it. 🙂
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“forever joined at odds” — I can relate to this well! A nice, terse poem. ~Jason
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I hear ya, LoveMore. Thanks for stopping by & commenting!
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“a cacophony of/ of apathy in gray.”
Love the sound of this….enjoyed the poem, a lot going in a few lines…JIM
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Thanks so much, Jim!
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Joined at odds… so many things to say when things don’t work out
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Isn’t that the truth?
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