It’s Quadrille Monday over at the dVerse Poets Pub! Our writing prompt is Magic. Exactly 44 words.
A roomful
of people or
even a nightclub
when you looked at me
and grinned
that crooked grin
Poof!
the world disappeared.
Just you and me.
Sometimes that magic still happens
when I gaze at the midnight sky
and wonder
which star is you.
Oh WOW. So few words, but such a touching tale. I love this.
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Lovely
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Thank you so much, Arcadia Maria.
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I agree with Beverly: You told a poignant tale in only a few words.
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I like the thought of having one’s attention so focused on another that the world disappears.
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Me too. 🙂 Thanks, Frank!
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the ending made my heart happy
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A magical bit of romance to make my Tuesday morning even sunnier!
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Thank you, Kim! What a nice thing to say. 🙂
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A heart touching love , never to be forgotten
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Thank you, Vandana.
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Sweet and devastating.
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Heart rending in so few words.
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Thank you, Linda.
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Sometimes we find the ones we miss in the far-away sky.
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Such precision! Wow! So impressive!
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Thank you, Stephen. They don’t call me SusanWritesPrecise for nothing! 🙂 Glad you enjoyed!
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So romantic 😊.
Pat
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Thank you, Pat. 🙂
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