She had never been close to her father: he’d wanted a boy, not her.
Bemused, he stood over his father’s freshly-dug grave and wondered:
Would dad have been pleased now that his daughter had become his son?
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She had never been close to her father: he’d wanted a boy, not her.
Bemused, he stood over his father’s freshly-dug grave and wondered:
Would dad have been pleased now that his daughter had become his son?
He always had a son, he just didn’t realize it.
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True!
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Wow. This is a good piece, Susan.
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Thanks, Ted!
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