Breathe

I have been tagged by crushedcaramel to create an elfchen, which is

an 11 word poem written in 5 lines

— Line 1=1word, Line 2=2words, Line 3=3words, Line 4=4 words, Line 5 =1 word.

Lines 1 and 5 should not be the same word.

Some

days I

miss you terribly.

Other days I can’t even

breathe.

5 thoughts

crushedcaramel says:

February 13, 2019 at 8:23 am

Wow! That’s so beautiful. I love it.

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Life of Elliott... says:

February 14, 2019 at 9:21 pm

I
Have no
Idea how you
Can do something like
This.

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1. The Abject Muse says:
  
  February 15, 2019 at 9:43 am
  
  What do you mean?
  
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  1. Life of Elliott... says:
    
    February 15, 2019 at 2:12 pm
    
    Write a poem. I’m hopeless at it.
    
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  2. The Abject Muse says:
    
    February 15, 2019 at 5:36 pm
    
    It takes a bit of practice. The more you read and practice, the better you will get. I learned a lot from https://dversepoets.com/.
    
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