Your Space

It’s Quatrain Monday at the dVerse Poets Pub! The writing prompt is “Kiss.”


What would it be like,

I wonder, to count the gold

flecks in your

hazel eyes and smell

the fabric

softener of your shirt,

to be in your space.

Utter perfection!

if we

(just for a moment)

were close enough

to kiss

one kiss.

 

 

SusanWritesPrecise/ Susan Marie Shuman
943thepoint.com

22 thoughts on “Your Space

  1. Remember, you don’t want a goodlooking kisser, they just pose Susan. Find s kisser who really likes to subtle ceremony and sweet sensuality of bestowing the kiss. It will rock your world and change your,lif! It will be the most sensationnal experience of your lif

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  2. “What would it be like,
    I wonder, to count the gold
    flecks in your
    hazel eyes and smell
    the fabric
    softener of your shirt,
    to be in your space.”

    These are just perfect details to make the reader really wonder…..That’s a romanticized closeness that comes with a desire and yearning. 🙂

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