Today at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, the Tan Renga Challenge is a Hineri (with a twist) challenge and that means you have to create a Tan Renga and two other stanza, so you have to create not only the second stanza of two lines, but also a third stanza (three lines) and a fourth stanza (two lines).

I wear loosely

and meet the man

at the night of firefly

© Katsura Nobuko (1914-2004)


alone I have loved him

forever without knowing him


fireflies romancing in

the moon’s sultry breeze

silk charmeuse ripples


teasing my skin I wait

for him. I will wait for him.


SusanWritesPrecise/ Susan Marie Shuman


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