Yesterday’s Catch
Today’s prompts at Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday are cold and storm, synonyms only.
Where I am concerned,
‘A whirlwind of apathy’
best describes your heart.
And you? A limp, oily carp,
yesterday’s catch thrown back.
A Carp
The Abject Muse
aka SusanWritesPrecise
SusanWritesPrecise@Gmail.com
Oh, I do like that catch-line. 🙂
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Thanks! Much appreciated 🙂
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Nicely done!
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Thank you!
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Oh, I like this Tanka… Lots of powerful emotions explode from your words. The comparison to a carp… excellent! ❤
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Thanks so much, Colleen.
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Lovely tanka!!🙂
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Thank you, Helene!
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My pleasure.
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I think we’ve all felt this way at times…(K)
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I agree. Thanks for stopping by!
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