It’s Quadrille Monday over at the dVerse Poets Pub!

Do you ever think

about me? Does my

existence enhance yours

in the slightest, or is my presence

in your life akin to clear gelatin?

And if I suddenly disappeared,

I wonder if you’d notice

the absence of loose change

jingling in your pocket.



usanWritesPrecise/Susan Marie Shuman

20 thoughts

  1. oh wow – the use of the image of gelatin really struck a fresh chord here – well done! and the closing, the loose change idea – of being “in pocket” is a perfect ending to this tight 44 –
    cool as a cucumber this wording –

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