Today at MLMM we have Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille, November 7th 2018 the voice of the wind.
Autumn’s crisp, clean breeze
(lacking Spring’s hyperbole)
tells it like it is.

Today at MLMM we have Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille, November 7th 2018 the voice of the wind.
Autumn’s crisp, clean breeze
(lacking Spring’s hyperbole)
tells it like it is.
Very nicely done–I hadn’t thought about the difference between autumn and spring breezes 🙂
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Thanks, Leslie. I hadn’t either. It was part of the writing prompt. Interesting idea, I thought.
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Truly, it is interesting. And I suspected there was a deeper meaning in your poem, but my fatigued mind just grabbed for the obvious “breeze” 🙂
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Not really Leslie, but there should have been! 🙂
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Ahhh…. 🙂
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