Our task for this week at MMLM’s Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille: Try to describe reality as you are experience it in your life. This way of writing haiku is called “shasei”, it’s invented by Masaoka Shiki, one of the four greatest haiku poets ever and the haiku poet who brought haiku into the 20th century.
Love is fickle and
fleeting and vain — but your lust
will never leave you.
I think you could write six more… one each for the 7 deadly sins … Lust certainly is one of them.
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That would be interesting to tackle. I might do that. Thanks for the suggestion!
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