Susan Marie Shuman/ SusanWritesPrecise


Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille, September 12th 2018 “unfinished”

“… challenge you this week to create the third, missing, line and than write a haibun with that completed haiku in it. Your haibun may have a maximum of 150 words (including the completed haiku).
Here is that unfinished haiku:”


missing a wife
the bamboo grass dives under —
submerged in mourning.

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