Today’s writing prompt at MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie is Opposing Forces. We must use the following antitheses in our writing:

– whisper and shout

– humid and dry

yet, you whisper them sweetly

— those cruel, ugly words —

that shout at

the tender places of my heart

too often

your hateful ways make me

wish I were deaf

Our love, once sublime

has sublimated like dry ice

on a humid day.


Susan Marie Shuman/SusanWritesPrecise


2 thoughts

  1. I’ve had boyfriends like that…
    Cool painting.
    Thankfully I haven’t needed to be in the dating pool for a loooong time.
    But we(I) can still write about those memories…

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